Your Presence

Hi guys, am here again to bore you with my own creative (?) writing...

I wrote this quite sometime back, so it's pretty amateurish... well, at least that's what some ppl have said... wot do you guys think? I'd really love to have yr comments...


Your Presence

I've read about it, I've heard about it...
Never thought it would happen to me...
You came into my life and turned my
Dreams & fantasies into reality.

You took away my sorrows;
You wiped away my tears;
You drove away my loneliness;
You calmed my fears.

You breathed new life into me;
You lifted my soul to new heights.
Your glances, your whispers, your touch
All made me feel so right...

But, you did this all as a friend,
Not realising you've become much more than that for me
I've become selfish since I met you -
I now need to be with you eternally.

I'm not asking for commitments,
I don't want to bind you with promises...
All i ask for is that you let me be by your side
Sharing your life, your sorrows, your happiness.